I understand that loglines should be like a skeletal summary of the story. But should it include key moments in the story? And should the ending of the story be revealed?
Like for example as part of the exercise given during the webinar on June 6th, this is the logline I came up with for my story
"After getting the ability to see into the future, a selfish man goes through a life-altering experience where he has to decide whether he should use the ability for his own good or for the rest of the world"
I can also come up with a different logline for the same story, but this time revealing the ending
"After getting the ability to see into the future, a selfish man is transformed into a good Samaritan when he decides to use his ability for the betterment of mankind"
Which one do you think is the better of the two?